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Smilodon Fatalis portrait by Aram-Rex Smilodon Fatalis portrait by Aram-Rex
Trying out some new logo designs, gonna change the last one, that's what I'm working on. For the moment, here's my latest Smildon drawing, probably best one I've done so far.
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Hi Aram, I have a critique if you take it.
First off, I find it a very striking portrait. Very expressive on the drawing and great contrast on the coloring.
Here is a Smilodon Fatalis skull that I found: images.bidorbuy.co.za/user_ima…
It seems to me that these cats have semi "normal" canines and four frontal teeth, and then the set of crazy saber teeth. The saber teeth fall more to the sides of the muzzle than to the front: way behind the six teeth. The molars you drew look cartoony since they are all bound together.
I also see the top of the head (eyes, muzzle, ears, cheeks) have a nice wide angle, but the jaw narrows down as it gets closer to the face, it should actually widen: g02.a.alicdn.com/kf/HTB1tTQuJV…

And that's what I offer :)
Hope you find it helpful. Cheers! keep on, this is great!
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philippeL Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing freaky beast!
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asari13 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool
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BlueSapphireTear Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Woah! It's amazing how much emotion you got in this piece! And I love the fine details!
Well done! ^^
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